Another original after quite a few days. Have written few more in between, but didnt find them as suitable and appropriate to share.Thema and mood even in this one is gloomy as it came out last night when I was feeling low :(. Now when I read this poem again I kind of liked it and hence decided to share with you all...
Don't forget to leave comments,feedback once you read this... :P
SHAYAD
Tujhe Dhoonda to Kahin Nazar Aayi nahin,
Mere Karib hai tu Itni Shayad !1!
Raat Kat Jati hai par Neend Aati Nahin
Sote Sote meri aakhen thak gayi hai Shayad !2!
Judai teri Vish si hai Sang mere
Yeh bhi naa rahi to Jee bhi na sakun main Shayad !3!
Meri aakhon se Ojhal sahi, Dil se Ojhal hona nahin,
Tere vicharon ke bina Mar bhi na sakun main Shayad !4!
Andhere mein Diya – salai si hai teri yadein,
Na ho Yeh to ujaale ki umeed bhi na ho Shayad !5!
Tilism teri aakhon ka chamakta hai roz mere aage,
Tera juda hona bhi koi Jadu hi na ho Shayad !6!
Kya hua jo tune Judai maang li,
Itna begairat bhi nahin ki de na sakun who bhi Shayad !7!
Payar mera Taron sa tim-timata tha Kabhi,
Tuta tara bhi to ek Murad puri karta hai Shayad !8!
Tere jane ke badd bhi jee to rahein hain
Per yeh saansen Udhuri hi hai Shayad!9!
Tute taar ke Gitar si hai Jindagi meri
Dhun to aati hai par Besuri hai Shayad !10!
Tera sath jo lata tha pal pal ki khushi
Tera duur jana bhi meri Khushi ke liye ho Shyaad!11!
Khush hai tu, Jaan ke Khush Bahut hai ‘DIVAY’
Na sambhli yeh Khushi to Bora na Jaun main Shayad !12!
Tujhe Dhoonda to kahin Nazar Aayi nahin,
Mere Karib hai tu Itni Shayad !1!
21 comments:
Kitna pyaar chhupa ke rakkhaa thaa, Shayad dil ke tootne pe aehsaas hua hoga!
bharosa hai ki yeh padhke ek pal unko, shayad phir se ek baar tujhse pyaar hua hoga.
Pata hai yeh cheating hai .. main itni mehnat se soch ke kuch likhta hun .. or tu within a sec kuch itna badhiya likh deti hai ki mujhe insulted feel hot ahai..
don mind JK
Thanks a lot for your comment U know I always love your comments.. and I have no reason to hate this one :P
nahi rey... maine to first thought likhi.. jo teri sunder poem ko padh ke dimaag main aayi...
Itni saari baate hai .. in ur poem.. it is just impossible for some1 like me to comment on it.
Thanks Again .. :| but dont underestimate urself .. :)
Shayad...
Definately a Nice One (& not just shayad)
lol..
Wish i could comment on the same lines as MJ..
But I'm not blessed... ;)
Sheena Thx for your comment .. I know Monika (MJ) is much above us lesser mortals..
But your comment means a lot to me thx a lot again ..
:))
hehehehe... MJ ko itna aadar, satkar pasand nahi hai dosto ...
Divay u must have heard this... writing as it suits the situation...
"Is bulandi pe bahut tanha hoon,
kaash main sabke baraabar hota;
kaash aisa koi manzar hota, mere kaandhe pe tera sir hota!"
Yeah yeah heard it in the voice of hari haran.. written by Tahir Fraz..
poore lyrics aise hai
"Kaash aisa koi manzar hotaa
Mera kandhe pe tera ser hota,
Jamaa karta jo me aaye huve sang
Ser chupaane keliye ghar hota
Is bulandi pe bahut tanha hoon, tanha hoon
Kaash mein sab ke barabar hota
Usne uljhaa diya duniya mein mujhe
Warna ek aur kalandar hota
Mera kandhe pe tera ser hota........"
Regards ..
hmmm...
Gham ka khazaana tera bhi hai, mera bhi;
yeh afsaana tera bhi hai mera bhi!
Apne gham ko geet bana ke gaa lena...
raag puraana tera bhi hai, mera bhi!
Waise you write really well. mujhe bhi inspiration mil rahi hai.. ki kuchh likhoo. lets see kab aaghaaz hota hai
Start soon yaar M just too sure.. U ll leave few good names behind..
nice poem....
kaafi ache shayar ho.... :P
Amajing Boss......... Nice Work:
Bahut udas hai koi tere Jane se.
Ho sake to laut AA kisi bahane se.
Tu lakh khafa sahi magar ek baar to dekh ,
Koi toot gaya hai TERE rooth Jane se...
Thanks a lot Rupali, finally a managed to get a comment from you..
@ Ankit : Thanks man.. nice words.. originals ? havnt heard of these ?
Yup all words are original, but not mine........ I am just copy wrighter...
hasin hai teri kavita, muftasir shayad,
Hai karti dil pe kisi ke koi asar shayad.
Baat tere hi nahi dil ki hai waise kewal,
Dard ki ye hi chhavi hai kahin idhar...Shayad.
Thanks a Lot Rachit .. Long time Since I shared a Poem with you :)..
Good to find you here .. :)
Lovely verse.. :)
Wah Ustad Wah!!!
Aanshu hai kuch chhalak aaye in aankho mein,
Inhe bhi tumse deedar karna tha, Shayad!!
Dhanyawad Govind... :)
A whole lifetime in one poem.. Beautiful..
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